My Treasure
Hai friends, I want to share about my family and my friends. Please check and enjoy. :)
My
name is Dionisius Oktavian Indrarto. My short name is Dion. I was born in
Madiun, October 22, 1997. My hobbies are playing basketball, touring, and
traveling to visit beautiful places. My story in this time, I will tell about
my friends at campus and my family.
First I will tell about my friends at campus. For 2 semester I feel a lot of friends who are less familiar. I feel the are still ashamed to join and say hello to your fellow friends. They are in group with a friend of his own. However, I tried to join and mingle though sometimes looks familiar, but with that way we know how the character and nature of our friends. Although sometimes they don’t consider me, but it’s okay I know that is one way of adaptation.
The second I will tell about my family. For me my family is a place for me tell heart’s content and various complaints. My family is also very supportive of whatever I want. They also always pray for what I am working on. And do not forget they also advise me if I am wrong in acting or doing no good. For me my family was very important in my life.
From my story, I can understand that the role of my family and my friends is very important in my life, so I love my family and my friends
First I will tell about my friends at campus. For 2 semester I feel a lot of friends who are less familiar. I feel the are still ashamed to join and say hello to your fellow friends. They are in group with a friend of his own. However, I tried to join and mingle though sometimes looks familiar, but with that way we know how the character and nature of our friends. Although sometimes they don’t consider me, but it’s okay I know that is one way of adaptation.
The second I will tell about my family. For me my family is a place for me tell heart’s content and various complaints. My family is also very supportive of whatever I want. They also always pray for what I am working on. And do not forget they also advise me if I am wrong in acting or doing no good. For me my family was very important in my life.
From my story, I can understand that the role of my family and my friends is very important in my life, so I love my family and my friends
Let's ride together ! Ride for peace brother ..
ReplyDeleteHi, Dionisius Oktavian Indrarto. Nice writing, bro. Please pay more attention with the punctuation on your writing. So that your writing will be more attractive.
ReplyDeleteAnd by the way, your hobbies are interesting. Why do not you share with us about the people around you when you do touring and traveling?
I am agree with you that family is a treasure. However, Dion, you could make your story better if you push yourself more. Do not be afraid to do some mistakes, bro. We are learning and we have not mastered writing yet. Therefore, as long as you can learn. Try to add some uncommon vocabularies and your writing skill will be excellent!
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